2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Zhangzhou,my hometown,a tuor city which owns a lot of lacesof historic interest and attracts many tourist,such as the Nanjing Earthen Building,the FengDongShi in the east hill. As to me,the most fun places is ChangTai Rafting.It is very stimulating when you are drifting with the current in a kayak.Actually,the flow always not being so slow,because alternating rock will chang the speed of streams. when you rafting,you can touch the water,enjoy the beauty,feel the slow breeze of the mountain.People who play the sport always screams,but also feel comfortable,because nature is so closing.Consequently,it is really a suitable place to get great fun for my friends.