2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Zhangzhou,my hometown,a tour city which owns a lot ofpaces of historic interest and attracts many tourists,such as the Nanjing Earthen Building,the FengDongShi in the east hill. As to me,the most amusing place is ChangTai Rafting.It is very stimulating when you are drifting with the current in a kayak.Actually,the flow never being so slow,because rock will chang the speed of streams. When you are on the drift,you can touch the water,enjoy the beauty,feel the slow breeze of the mountain.People who play the sport always screams,but also feel comfortable .Consequently,it is really a suitable place to get great fun for my friends.