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Be a smart consumer In my opnion,we should be a smart consumer when spent the money. As usual,some students are careful with money in daily life,they collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); they look for group-buy deals if they eat out or travel; they don't buy clothes unless in a sale. These behavior may look smart ,in fact,it really disaster our ability to make a choose ,even we will lose our judement . There comes a example , I used carefully to spend my money ,when I buy something I always look at the price before I decide whether buy it or not.For a long time ,I didn't know what's things I need or I desire to buy it ,even I lose my favorite in choose clothes or other things,I really feel terrible.Finnally,I understand that what's desire in your heart is most important for your choose ,as for moeny,maybe you are poor lacked it very much. Anyway,be a smart consumer not be a dull who just make choose according the price.You must belive that you can achieve any goal when you follow your heart.
