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你们学校在征集改善道路交通状况的文章，请你根据题目要求及下面图画的内容提示，为学校的壁报写一篇稿件。谈谈你对交通状况的思考。
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中有几处句子错误；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多。
some people cross the road ignore the red light.some p cross the road talikng and laughing.some hurdle when there are many cars around himlead to some cars hit the road.we should urge the people to look out when crossing the road and avoid our laziness .too much mistakes when comes to talk about the traffic problem
