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2007年考研英语作文真题:面对困难时候的想法

发布时间:2013-05-20 21:59浏览次数:2180
要求:
题目:面对困难时候的想法(题目自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.support your view with an example/ examples

字数:200满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达较恰当,高级词汇表达灵活;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

As is vividly reveal in the drawing above, a young man, who is smiling with positive energy, is sailing with his dream to future and success. What is conveyed in the drawing is both profound and thought-provoking. The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of understanding of the Chinese dream. The Chinese dream belongs to every person in China. Recently, China has achieved remarkable economic achievements, but the living standard of people can be raised still further. Every person wants to enjoy better education, better income and more stable social security. The people hope China can be a better home for them and their children. Above all, the Chinese people know clearly that a happy life for the individual is only possible with the prosperity of the whole nation. The Chinese dream has motivated the Chinese peole.

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