字数:200满分:100分
作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者高级词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文中衔接词丰富。
As is vividly reveal in the drawing above, a young man, who is smiling with positive energy, is sailing with his dream to future and success. What is conveyed in the drawing is both profound and thought-provoking. The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of understanding of the Chinese dream. The Chinese dream belongs to every person in China. Recently, China has achieved remarkable economic achievements, but the living standard of people can be raised still further. Every person wants to enjoy better education, better income and more stable social security. The people hope China can be a better home for them and their children. Above all, the Chinese people know clearly that a happy life for the individual is only possible with the prosperity of the whole nation. The Chinese dream has motivated the Chinese people.