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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10391
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用。

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For a growing number of Chinese people, to get some certificates during their spare time has come into fashion. From languages to business skills to teaching, certificates act as proof that they are skilled in something specific. What's more, a resume with just degrees and work experiences looks a bit boring; certificates, like accessories, complete the outfit. Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon, but the following are the most critical ones. First, they show employers that they're versatile; they have made an effort to learn skills outside their major or occupation. In addition, certificates show that they are active; they don't sit around in their spare time. Instead they're constantly looking forward to improving themselves. All of the above is what sets them apart from other applicants when applying for a sought-after position. In my opinion, certificates are attractive, but should not be overemphasized.Other practical skills are equally important. To conclude, we should emphasize more on improving our ability instead of merely getting a certificate.

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