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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71614
要求:
Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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作者词汇量偏小,另外文章有些单词拼写错误;全文结构较为严谨;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

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Today,a foreign friend of my is going to see me.I'm so happy because we long time can't talk.First, i will with her to a eat.Her often talk to me her's so like china food and want to eat.When we have eat,i will lard her go to my school.I think if a place is the most interestling,it's my school.I stay there in my most time,and i had a hard to forget time.I think there is the most interesting place.

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