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Today,a foreign friend of my is going to see me.I'm so happy because we long time can't talk.First, i will with her to a eat.Her often talk to me her's so like china food and want to eat.When we have eat,i will lard her go to my school.I think if a place is the most interestling,it's my school.I stay there in my most time,and i had a hard to forget time.I think there is the most interesting place.