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The Main Difference Between My College Life And My Middle School Life Have you ever considered the changes that are taking place and will take place in your life as a college student？Have you travel along？Have you stay a place long time， only you？May be you or not，but I was.And that was the difference between college life and middle school life . First of all, I need independent on me everything. I did a lot of that I have never do before. The first time that I stay in a completely stranger place, there is no friends, no parent, I should do everything independent on me. That was no question of ever resort to my parent. I independent on wash my cloth, clean up the room, such as trivial matters. And learn about determing my daily agenda, plan the expense of money. Whatever the daily life or study, I need independent on me.But when the middle school life , parent can help to you, with you still a children, with you stay near apart of you home. In middle school, whatever the culture, foot habit, and some of other, was the same in dgree. In college, people come from different place, may be we have different culture, we have different religious, and so on. However, the important of we can accept the difference of each other. During the college year,my broadent my horizon, and learn about lot of , and that was never aquired in my hometown. All in all, in different people eyes, different opinion of the difference between college life and middle school life .
