注意:信件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入字数。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
Dear Jane, I’m very glad to hear from you.After a year of studying in senior school,I have already adapted myself to the life of study in the senior school.To my delight,I get along well with my teachers and students.And I love English so much that I make great efforts to read and recite the new words and passages.In my opinion,English to me is what water to life.But what worries me a lot is that I still have some difficulty in English study such as grammar.Luckily,my teachers are very helpful,and they give me the materials which tell me what I should lay emphasis on.And I have a belief that I will make great achievements in English if I can study bit by bit. Please write to me soon and tell me all about yourself. Yours, Xiao Hua