采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇表达不够灵活,但有些单词拼错了;建议平时练习中,多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。
welcome to my hometown in zhangjiajie.There are many funny place and have beautiful scenery and magnificent architectures.So i will take you to the most interesting place.Firstly,you can mountain, you don t think the mountain is ordinary, look at it carefully,it look like a animals,such as monkey, snake and so on. you can imagination that mountain is require by people. no,i can certaintly tell you it is nature.when you go to the top of hill , you will take for holy place, it seems to paradise.