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Today around 6 o 'clock in the morning, Xinzhu road residential building fires, 4 people were killed and 30 injured. Many people died because of a fire, most of the residents in the home. As well as residents too nervous to can't find the exit, and even some people choked to death.The exact cause of the fire the police are still investigating. Finally, the expert suggested us no only we should be calm down when escaping but also pass by fire escape and quickly sent out a distress signal.
