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作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
How to live a meaningful life "How to live a meaningful life" is a thought provoking question and the answers maybe have a lot. The one of answer"the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." I cannot agree with it more. In my life, we can see that some person willing to address themselves to help other person. Those folks were remembered by the people and they living become meaningful. Such as our beloved premier Zhou, he dedicates his all to the people, meanwhile, willing all people's respect. On the other hand, if one spent his life pursuing benefits for himself, his life will feel meaningless and even was censure for the people. Many corrupt officials are this end. Therefore, I think whether the living has meaningful or not, it was decide that you do what for other people. To make my life more meaningful, we should do something that is helpful to other or whole society. Only in this way can we make our lift meaningful.
