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Ways of making friends Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody. First of all, you must be friendly to others. Smile at others and you always sure to get a smile in return. You should think more of others than of yourself and try your best to make a stranger fell at home. Think as you are in his position. Try to remember others’ names, which will make them fell that they have made an impression on you. If you don’t agree with others,don’t argue but discuss with them. Finally,don’t believe those who leave their friends when they are in trouble because “A friend in need is a friend indeed.”
