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With the development of the Chinese people's life standard, Internet has been enjoyed the popularity among China. As a effective tool of learning, many students are likely to choose dispaced-learning on the Internet instead of traditional learning. Some people argue whether Internet will take bad efforts on chinese education? For my point of view, it's unnecessary to worry about the impact of Internet since it can help create a more equal learning environment. First thing first, there are tens of thousands of students who cannot enter top-tier schools for many different reasons, however, they can use the same resources of learning by learning on the internet.Because there are lots of public learning resources on the internet which can help students to learn themselves. Secondly, sharing teaching resources can also be very useful for many teachers. By learning from each others, teachers can absorb the elit part of others' teaching methods. Therefore,the quality and environment of teaching will be better than before from a benign competition. Last but not least, dispaced-learning on the Internet and traditional learning both have their advantages and disadvantages.There is no need to worry about that the new type of learning will replace traditional learning. All in all,facing a new type of thing such as internet,people are supposed to try to utilize it well and from a long-turm perspective, if these two different kinds of methods can be combined, chinese education will be more effective than before.