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When it comes to tourism in China,there are some different opinions about that.Some people think the China economic can be accelerate with the development of the tourism industry .However,like a coin has two sides,there is a positive aspect and a negative aspect to tourism.Too many tourists may bring harm to the environment. First of all,too may tourists always loved to some places of interest that have Long histories and beautiful environment,but they may bring harm to the environment.For example,there are some tourists who don’t obey the rules of location so that cause bad influence just like writing ‘going on’ in the places of interest.Besides, A small place suddenly appear too many people, the ecological environment can’t bear it and it may be destroyed.Last but not least,the tourism always boring much economic benefits,and the location may ignore the environment.As a result, the places of interest of Chinese traditional culture is more or less damaged. In short,from what has been discussed above,we may safely draw the conclusion that tourism industry is a booming industry of China.But it also do harm to the local environment.As far as I am concerned,we should not only pursuit economic benefits of the tourism industry,but also give consideration to the tourist environment protection.
