2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In my hometown,Libai is the most famous person,which is a poeter.The Libai Guli is the place of Misson and praise him.So that is why I would like to take him to see The Libai Guli in first. In all of his life,he had written a lot of greatest poetries,such as