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2012年10月27日雅思大作文真题:广告到底能不能影响人们的消费

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:56浏览次数:6929
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题目要求:

Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?

题目讲解:

题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。

广告使人们都看上去一样,也就是广告的宣传效应会影响人们的消费行为 manipulate people's buying behaviour然后掀起一些特定品牌的时尚create fashion。也就是去写广告的影响力会使一些brands垄断市场monopolise the market。
但是广告其实并不会使人们都一样,我们不能低估人们对于产品质量和个人喜好的理性underestimate people's rationality to products quality and the influence of personal preference.
这么一分析,还是我们说的广告经典题,广告到底能不能影响人们的消费!
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作者词汇表达丰富多彩,但是要留意单词拼写;句式变化较为明显,可适当增加从句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

In the present age, advertising are playing significant roles in our lives.When you go shopping, you will find advertisiments all over the shopping mall. Moreover, even you take a bus, you also can not miss the advertising on the bus tv.Obviously, the advertising fulfills our daily life.But in the meantime, whether advertsing will manipulate people's buying behaviour has sparked much debate. Personally, I am in favor that advertising is indeed changing our buying custome. Convincing arguments can be made that the manufactors expand their products sales by media hype.Especially, when a new product appears to the market in the circumstance that the customers have no idea about the functions of it.The media hype of the advantages of the product will became more important even it maybe blow things out of all proportions.Such as a nutritional product named BrianAge which was very popular in China sometimes.It provide helps to improve the elders healthy problems as it claims, but at the beginning of it emerges in the market, all the things people know about it is a song which was keeping singing during the TV advertising.At the most booming of its sales increasing, the BrianAge became a fasional signal stand for the honourable present to the elders intead of the meaning of nutritional product. Admittedly, we can not underestimate people's rationality to products quality and personal preference.Obviously, some people who admir the simple lifestyle will spend more attention to products quality and cost performance. Even so it is not a ease job to figure out the best option when our all sense is sinking in the severe offense from the advertising. In summary, I would concede that advertising manipulate people's buying behaviors in the results of overloading the social operation cost and misleading consuming concept.Overall, I am convinced that some policies should be established by the relative section to prohibit prevalent misleading advertising.

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