题目要求:
Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. Do you agree or disagree?
题目讲解:
题义理解上有那么一点难!但是总之都跟广告有关。
作者词汇基础扎实,拼写也很棒;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
In the present age, advertising is playing significant role in our lives.When you go shopping, you will find advertisements all over the shopping mall. Moreover, when you take a bus you can also not miss the advertising on the bus TV.Obviously, the advertising fulfills our daily life.But in the meantime, whether advertising will manipulate people's buying behaviour has sparked much debate. Personally, I am in favor that advertising is indeed changing our consumption habit. Convincing arguments can be made that the manufacturers expand their products sales by media hype.Especially, when a new product appears to the market in the circumstance that the customers have no idea about the functions of it.The media hype of the advantages of the product became more important even it maybe blows things out of all proportions.Such as a nutritional product named BrianAge which was very popular in China sometimes.It provides helps to resolve the elders health problems as it claims, but at the beginning of it emerges in the market, all the things people know about it is a song which was keeping singing during the TV advertising.At the most booming of its sales increasing, the BrianAge became a fasional signal stand for the honourable present to the elders instead of the meaning of nutritional product. Admittedly, we can not underestimate people's rationality to products quality and personal preference.Obviously, some people who admire the simple lifestyle will spend more attention to products quality and cost performance. Even so it is not an ease job to figure out the best option when our sense is sinking in the grave offense from the advertising. In summary, I would concede that advertising manipulates people's buying behaviors in the results of overloading the social operation cost and misleading consuming concept.Overall, I am convinced that some policies should be established by the relative section to prohibit misleading advertising.