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"Baby, you don't play the football game, it is dangrous and lost your time. I hope you learn to play the piano and read a useful book." "Baby, you don't watch TV or plays the i-pad, it will be bad for your eyes." Do you remember these requests in your memory? One month ago, I am going to buy some food in the BianTai supermarket with my son. When I enter the supermarket, I find a little boy in front of the gate. He was sitting on the floor and his granny protect to him. "How old he is? " I asked her. "He is 14 months old, but he can't walk alone. When he wants to walk, we are afraid he will slip every time." she said. "He knows that protects himself, so you are not afraid that he will slip. And if he slips, it doesn't matter, you don't take no notice of him, he will stand. He needs to be independent." I said. How should parents help children to be independent? I suggest when you ask your children after this thing, you can say that: "You'd better try to do it, the result doesn't matter, but this is your experience in your life." "My advice for your reference, you must choose and responsible for your doing." "If you have a difficult thing, you must do with it, but you can't complete it. You don't discourage and do it again." In fact, parents should help children to be independent. We should encourage children when they were slipped. This is a right choice.