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语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误。
different people often have different kinds of financial levels. therefore, some people argue that financial disparity do really affect friendship. however, as for me , what actually play an important role in friendship is common interest or hobby. that is to say, people who have extremly different financial situations also can have true friendship. first things first, people in different financial situations can have same interests which can help people communicate heart to heart. sincere communication is necessary for friendship. for instance, the famous engels and marx whose friendship lasted several decades are really soul mates.engels was rich as an entrepreneur, however, marx was too poor to support his family and continue to write. but financial disparity couldn't take them apart, on the comtrary, engels help marx finish his famous work and take care of his family.they had been always struggle to attain their communist dream. last but not least, if a kind of friendship can be affected by money, these fair-weather friendships are meanless.
