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雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

发布时间:2013-07-04 15:28浏览次数:3581
要求:

The pie chart below gives information about  the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

用户练习作文:

As the pie chart shows, we can get the information about the fast food preferences of teenagers in the USA. First we can see, hamburgers, pizza and French chicken are three most favourite fast food. They account for 33%, 26% and 22%. Then the less favourite food are fried chicken, tacos and sushi. They account for 9%, 7% and 3%. To sum up, teenage people prefer hamburgers, pizza and French fries rather than fried chicken, tacos and sushi.

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