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2013年2月2日雅思大作文真题TASK2

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:25浏览次数:822
要求:

Some people think it's all bad for children to watch TV, others believe watching TV can bring positive effects on children when they grow up, discuss both and give your own opinion. 

写作分析:

参考过去出现的相关题目可以帮助同学们更好地解题:
2008.01.10 TV/ video/ computer games: Good or bad
2008.05.10 Children watch tv: at home VS school
2009.05.16 Imagination and language skills: Read books Vs watch TV
2013.01.05 2009.05.16
2010.03.27 children more Tv, less activities, why? measures?
2010.09.25 Too much TV for children, How affect? What measures?
2010.11.04 Parents read for children Vs free choice on TV/internet/books
2007.12.15 Disasters & violence on TV: why, effects?
2007.11.17 Ads aimed at children should be banned?
第一段:看电视是孩子们很重要的课余活动,有些孩子甚至对电视成瘾
第二段:看电视太多的消极面
1对身体健康不利
2 减少和同龄人以及家人的互动与交流
3 对智力发展不利
4 有些电视内容不适合小孩子
第三段:适量有选择的看电视有益儿童发展
1 增加知识,和探索世界的兴趣
2 丰富课余生活
3 和父母或同龄人一起看有助于更好的亲子或朋友互动
第四段:适量地选择适合孩子的电视节目,并且尽量和父母或同龄人一同看电视有助于孩子的健康发展,否则电视将对孩子产生消极影响。
用户的作文(系统评分70.5分
评语:

可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;作者在学术词汇方面还有很大的空间,还要注意单词拼写;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

Should parents allow their Children watch TV Baby is fragile, and they don't strongly resisited the radio effect from electric machines ,especially the common-seen TV set. According to the docotor watching is bed for your absorption ,Eye vision etc. But there are some voices being heard is that watching TV is a convient way for children to learn .They acquire knowledge throng TV programme. Every coin as two sides. Watching TV is good or bad that based on the time and quality of the programme. Some children is addicted on Cartoon programme and they eat while wathcing TV, it's bad for absorption. Even there was new that in Taiwan, a girl kept watching a polpar TV series ,the authorgraphy for Zhenghuan for more than 12 hours successively ,in the end she is unfortunately diagonized with eye sickness. Baby and Children should be limited with time spending on TV soups. Baby and Children been effected by some vilolent fight TV programe ,like boxing game, killing games etc. Some ghost series also scare children to scream. Since babies and children are innocent in their own world ,to keep them fresh and curious to the beautiful world, it's our responsiblity to keep them against bad culture erosion. All in all ,watching TV is not good or bad in effect ,that all based on the way to watch TV.

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