过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
In this time,with the development of finance and technology,the earth become a village,we are so easy to go to every nation,for convenience ,more and more people saying common language,Dialects are no acceptable in public place,but we should not forget it. In public places,we chat with each other for something confused or something we want to share with each other.The type of language aims to let others know what we say and what we want .if we say dialects,many people may not get the point what we mean.In public places,we should respect others,the most important thing is let they know what we mean.So,when they talk to you ,they will make their best to let you know what they say. As far as i'm concerned, although dialects are not very acceptable in public places,but when we at home,it's a good way to make people more friendly.