作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In this time,with the development of finance and technology,the earth becomes a village,we are so easy to go to every nation,for convenience,more and more people saying common language,Dialects are no acceptable in public place,but we should not forget it. In public places,we chat with each other for something confused or something we want to share with each other.The type of language aims to let others know what we say and what we want.If we say dialects,many people may not get the point what we mean.In public places,we should respect others.The most important thing is to let they know what we mean.So,when they talk to you,they will make their best to let you know what they say. As far as I am concerned, although dialects are not very acceptable in public places, when we are at home,it's a good way to make people more friendly.