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In the vivid and funny cartoon,tow person who each lose a leg and disable are walk toghter,they are's not need the suppert.It is common knowledge that disable person do somgthing uneasy by himself,but two person coorporate easily. Admittely,disable person one is uneasy do something successful,but them do toghter is easy.The trurth that coorporate improves each other has a better future.The coorpate not only belief each other but aslo achieve more sucess. It is my belief that coorporate keeps person more hppay than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.