字数:200满分:100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disable are walk lighter, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that disable person does something uneasy by himself, but two person corporate easily. Admittedly, disable person one is uneasy does something successful, but they do together be easy.Truth that corporate improves each other has a better future.The company not only believe each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that corporate keeps a person more happy than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.