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2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北

发布时间:2013-05-20 22:01浏览次数:19637
要求:
题目:你一条腿,我一条腿,你我一起,走南闯北(题目需自拟)
说明 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay
要求
1.describe the drawing briefly
2.explain its intended meaning
3.give your comments

字数:200满分:100分


用户的作文(系统评分69.0分
评语:

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用高级词汇;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。

用户练习作文:

In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disable are walk lighter, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that disable person does something uneasy by himself, but two person cooperation easily. Admittedly, disable person one is uneasy does something successful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperation improves each other has a better future.The coorporate not only believe each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that cooperation keeps a person more happy than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.

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