字数:200满分:100分
文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升,高级词汇使用过少;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误。
In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disable are walk lighter, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that disable person does something uneasy by himself, but two person cooperation easily. Admittedly, disable person one is uneasy does something successful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperation improves each other has a better future.The cooperation not only believe each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.