2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇。

In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disablity are walk lighter, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that disable person does something uneasy by himself, but two person cooperation easily. Admittedly, disable person one is uneasy does something successful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperation improves each other has a better future.The cooperation not only believe each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.