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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用高级词汇就更好了。
In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disability, are walk lighter, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that disabled person does something uneasy by himself, but two person cooperation easily. Admittedly, the disable person one is uneasy does something successful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperation improves each other has a better future.The cooperation not only believed each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.