字数:200满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足。
In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disability, is walking lighter, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that a disabled person does something uneasy by himself, but cooperation easily two persons. Admittedly, the disable person one is apprehensive does something successful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperates with each other to have a better future.The cooperation not only believed each other but also achieves more success. It is of the view that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each othe