2009年12月英语六级作文真题:送孩子参加艺术班

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

With increasing of develop contemporary society dramatically,an increasing number of parents willing to send their kids to art classes.For this phenomenon,a great many people deem that it is significant for the future of their children.These parents hold that it will obtain a lot of advantages than other kids. However,other have a different point about this hot issue.They consider that the kids will lose their freedom to chose what they truly want do in their childhood,if the parent send them to art classes.The more importantly,these people think that the kids would suffer this heavy task in their litter age,the children will become more internal to communicate with other kids. As i am considered that we should keep a balance on this problem.We should let kids to chose what they want do.If children like this class,we should send them to art class,or the parents should respect them.Only in this way can the children have a wonderful and colorful future.