2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色。

In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disability, is walking together, they are's not need the support.It is common knowledge that a disabled person does something uneasy by himself, but cooperation easily two persons. Admittedly, the disable person one is apprehensive does something successful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperates with each other to have a better future.The cooperation not only believed each other but also achieves more success. It is of the view that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.