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To be a real smart consumer Its well acknowledged that we as university students own not too much money ,therefore, we are very careful with our money in daily life .For example , we eat out or travel in group ,we donnot buy expensive clothers .however , some people donot support these behavior,in they opinion , its bad for us to be a smart consumer. As for me ,these behavior are not only helpful to be a real smart consumer ,but also we can gain much joyment . To begin with ,our money come from our parents .they are very hard to support our study and family ,we donot have extra money to spend .,therefore ,we should careful with our money .In addition ,careful with money is not a bad thing .instead it can make us consider more things,and wise to use money .we can decrease the possible to buy something that unuseful. last but not least, eat out or travel with friends or cassmates is very happy ,we stay together not only gain joyment but also improve our reationship or friendship. In conclusion ,careful with money is a good habit. we can learn and gain many from that .what s more ,we aslo can be a good consumer .
