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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；句式变化较为明显，可适当增加从句的使用。
In our daily life,we would make choices by "Yes" or "No"when someone ask for help.But,we always say "No" when we are not willing to say "Yes" by different reasons. There were many reasons let us to choose "No",when someone asked us for help.For example,our ability were too little to help others.Another,the things what they asked for help were interest opposition for us.And other,that moment we had a bad emotion so that we didn't want to say "Yes" to help others. But nothing is absolute in daily life.In my opinion,all the reason why somebody said "Yes" rather than "No", was that they just want to make any contribution to the society no matter how small it is. Do you know why we say "Yes" though we should say "No" that maybe bring any benefits to us?After saying "Yes",we maybe get some surprises,such as friendship,opportunities or some new insight,experience and knowledge. All in all,when we want to say "No",we should choose it in a careful attitude.
