字数:200满分:100分
语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disability, are mutual support to walk together, they are not needed the crutch support.It is well known that a disabled person does something hardly by himself, but cooperation easily two persons. Admittedly, thedisable person one is apprehensive does something unsuccessful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperates with each other to have a better future.The cooperation not only believed each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.