2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；拼写很棒，可适当增加高级词汇的使用；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩。

In the vivid and funny cartoon, tow person who each loses a leg and disability, are mutual support to walk together, they are not needed the crutch support.It is well known that a disabled person does something hardly by himself, but cooperation easily of two persons. Admittedly, the disable person one is apprehensive does something unsuccessful, but they do together be easy.The truth that cooperates with each other to have a better future.The cooperation not only believed each other but also achieves more success. It is my belief that cooperation keeps a person happier than before.That is a cheerful thing who got a help each other.