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文章衔接手法恰当;若增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;作者词汇量偏小,本文拼写错误较多。
What the two cartoon brings into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not suffer wind and rain is thrive ,but the flower in the second picture is breakdown at suffered the wind and rain.Of course,the greenhouse is a inportant element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly,the person aren't suffered exerises and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person is need wind and rain to exerise himself.The seriser eriverment not only give person a strong heart but aslo teach person grow up face the hardly consistation. Anyway,it would be study that the wind and rain of me.My advie is :go face the wind and rain,don't fear the hard in life.