2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

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What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not suffer wind and rain are thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it suffer the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is an important element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person isn't suffered exercises and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person is need wind and rain to exercise himself.The seriser eriverment not only give person a strong heart but aslo teach person grow up tackle the hardly condition. Anyway, it would be studied that the wind and rain of me.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.