字数:200满分:100分
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;文中用词稍显贫乏,请多使用高级词汇;作者应适量增加从句的使用量。
What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not suffer wind and rain are thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it suffer the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is an important element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person isn't suffered exercises and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person is need wind and rain to exercise himself.The seriser circumstance not only give person a strong heart but also teach the person grown up to face the hardly condition. Anyway, it would be studied that the wind and rain of me.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.