小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；适当丰富句式；文中拼写错误稍多，词汇表达贫乏。

my good friend is my mather .she ver beautiful and she ver lovely. She love smaile and she also tall me "smaile make people beautiful !" She had rather good voice is good at singing and dancing.She offten teched me dance ,but don't like dance. I always follwed with my mother togerhter singing. I love my mother ver much!