文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;行文较为流畅,作者文中过渡词使用的不错;采用了一些简单的从句。
June 8 Dear David : I was glad that you have noticed our effects directed towards environment protection .Thank you for your concern. More and more people in China appeal to use environment-friendly shopping bags when the plastic bags in variety of supermarkets need to be paid .Gradually, people begin to enjoy this kind of shopping style and realize the worthy of living a green life .I have to say that's so cool . Also, the new shopping bags are stable ang easy-using . Last but not least , this is just one of the steps that we take and I look forward to the next miracle to coming up . Yours sincerely yours Li Hua