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As a famous saying goes, “A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention”.There’s no denying that we are in the Information Age,so we must admit that the information explosion is unavoidable. The new information age has brought us so much convenience that we are allowed to get enough information.Nevertheless, we are also distracted by that. For example, when searching for something online, we are easily carried away by irrelevant information and forget our original plan. Besides, some information is totally useless,may be just advertisement. In that case,what we can do to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information?As far as i am concerned,firstly, make a list of what we really want to seach before we open the website,which will help us to refuse some irrelevant information. Secondly, find some trustful websites and then save them. Only by doing this can we easily leave some ads and useless information behind. In short, Information Age is undoubtly a wonderful age.What matters most to us is that we must use it properly and learn to avoid being distracted by irrelevant information.
