2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中从句数量稍显不足，注意个别有错误的句子。

What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not subjected to the wind and rain is thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it lied under the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is an important element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person isn't suffered exercises and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person is need wind and rain to exercise himself.The Severe environment not only give the person a strong heart but also the person grown up to face the hardly condition. Anyway, it would be studied that the wind and rain of me.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.