2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not subjected to the wind and rain is thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it lied under the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is an important element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person isn't suffered exercises and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person is need wind and rain to exercise himself.The Severe environment not only give the person a strong heart but also the person grown up to face the hardly condition. Anyway, it is a kind of learning that the wind and rain of me.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.