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Tourism is enjoying a boom in China,however,some people worry that too many tourists will do harm to the environment.Personally,I opine that will not cause that.Below are reasons of it: Firstly,with the development of tourism,environment was taken into consideration when government or canpanies develop tourism.What's more,when we begin to develop tourism,we can evaluate the condition of the potential spot so as to avoid polluting the environment.Furthermore,mass media can be used to arouse people's awareness of environment protection.Today,the eco-travel is a good example,which not only can meet people's demands,but also can help the local people. In a nutshell,albeit some place do exist the phenomenon that tourism is hurting the environment.However,as long as we hold the belief that we should pretect the environment we can also develop tourism well.
