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What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not subjected to the wind and rain is thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it lied under the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is an important element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person through exercises in a tough environment. and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person need wind and rain to exercise himself.The Severe environment not only the person has a strong heart but also the person grown up to face the hardly condition. Not matter what, it is a kind of learning that the wind and rain of me suffered.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.