字数:200满分:100分
作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。
What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not subjected to the wind and rain is thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it lay under the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is an essential element of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person through exercises in a tough environment and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person needs wind and rain to exercise himself.The severe environment not only the person has a strong heart but also the person grew up to face the hardly condition. No matter what, it is a kind of learning that the wind and rain of me suffered.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.