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2003年考研英语作文真题:温室花朵经不起风雨

发布时间:2013-05-20 18:49浏览次数:6973
要求:
题目 温室花朵经不起风雨(题目需自拟)
说明 Study the following set o f drawings carefully and write an essay
要求
1.describe the set of drawings.interpret its meaning.
2.point out its implications in our life.
3.You should write about 200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

字数:200满分:100分

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作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;词汇表达不够丰富,要增加高级词汇的使用;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅。

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What the two cartoons bring into focus is the flower in the greenhouse not subjected to the wind and rain is thriving,but the flower in the second picture is a breakdown it lied under the wind and rain.Of course, the greenhouse is a critical component of the flower not suffered wind and rain. Not surprisingly, the person through exercises in a tough environment and study to hardly embraces a better future.The person needs to wind and rain to exercise himself.The severe environment not only the person has a strong heart but also the person grew up to face the hardly condition. No matter what, it is a type of learning that the wind and rain of me suffered.My advice is:go face the wind and rain, don't hear the hard in life.

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